再来一个句子，尝试一下 顺句驱动 翻译

mxh3698

所谓顺句驱动，指的是尽量不调整原文句序，把原文切割成不同的意群/准意群来进行翻译，在同传和视译中是最重要也是运用最广的技巧。
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; F8 A" V+ c1 U* M5 v: m0 EA latest survey on 399 companies from the United States and other APEC member economies found tax cuts and rent reduction are the two areas where companies feel the Chinese government can assist them to overcome the financial difficulties they face due to the outbreak.

mxh3698

自己出题自己做，抛出砖头一块——

A latest survey on /有一个最新调查，
9 n' G7 ^* H* A$ G1 v: d# U1 e399 companies from the United States and other APEC member economies /399公司，分别来自美国和其他亚太经合组织，接受了调查，
found tax cuts and rent reduction /（调查）表明减税和减租
are the two areas  /是两个领域
( c; v" E& O& y+ |where companies feel/在这两个领域公司认为
the Chinese government can assist them/中国政府可以帮助他们
to overcome the financial difficulties they face due to the outbreak/克服财务困难，这些财政困难是因为新肺疫情造成的。

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mxh3698

( Q8 T, @+ ?5 R意群切割更大一些，会更简洁和流畅一些——
' n- C4 v; b# i) H2 K5 D& ZA latest survey on /有一个最新调查，
/ v# B& |) `* j0 L399 companies from the United States and other APEC member economies /399公司，分别来自美国和其他亚太经合组织，接受了调查，
8 u- n/ Y4 m* K& p4 \% xfound tax cuts and rent reduction are the two areas  /调查发现减税和减租是两个领域
! e3 ^/ E/ ?* f: N! T, e9 Iwhere companies feel/上述公司认为在这两个领域
9 [* ]. v! ~( v, f4 Q, V) J6 Q; Wthe Chinese government can assist them/中国政府可以帮助他们
/ S" @2 [, Q, P" N, ^to overcome the financial difficulties they face due to the outbreak/克服新肺疫情造成的财务困难。
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liqima

白瞎！

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mxh3698

liqima 发表于 2020-2-25 18:14
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